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VAS
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0 posted 2003-11-23 12:18 PM


the morning’s rise
a gentle glow
to bring the day to light

a whisper’s muse
that ends the dream
and puts to sleep the night

©October 27, 2003

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2003 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-11-23 12:28 PM



~ a gentle write that softly whispers one to a soothing morning  rise...

Nice to read you again, Dear VAS!

~ May your day be as glorious as the rising sun!


EA

Margot
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2 posted 2003-11-23 01:58 PM


VAS,

Beautifully sweet

Margot

Kahlil
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3 posted 2003-11-23 02:05 PM


This is just lovely.  ~K~
Temptress
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4 posted 2003-11-24 02:53 AM


sometimes I wish the night could be an insomniac..

This is beautiful.

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!


CocoBaci
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5 posted 2003-12-17 01:06 PM


Enjoyed this veryyyyyyyyy much...
Smiles2uPoetFriendVAS
*~coco~*

Sunshine
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6 posted 2003-12-17 01:25 PM



So glad this was bumped back up!

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7 posted 2003-12-17 01:35 PM


Wow !! A true keeper this jewel is! hugs, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2003-12-17 01:58 PM


nicely done, Virginia..and thank you coco for bringing this back to us

*s
M

steavenr
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9 posted 2003-12-17 02:30 PM


Done very well.  Tight and easily read.  Very enjoyable.
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