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Missing You...
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Missing You... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Missing You I wander the blues wondering at times where your footsteps have disappeared to. No sandy beaches nearby calling me to walk along with you... to trip over words of despair, needing comfort by friendship's touch. No names to search for when all others have gone away, hidden now by hurt or maybe a bit lost in this world of ours of need. But I am not alone in these thoughts of missing you and am waiting to hear the call from the blue so I can serenade again, with you. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
powerful melancholy and longing Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Longing full of sweet hope. Beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Well done... I really enjoyed this.  ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You expressed this longing in such a gentle, loving manner. M, you have such a talent for conveying your moods and thoughts. You have such a loving heart. I do so hope that the love you so richly deserve, comes into your life and fills you completely with joy. I know that it is meant to be. Loving hugs, EA |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you all...but this one is for Blues Serenade...I am wondering where she has gone..and hope that it is not for very long... M |
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Rita 3 Junior Member
since 2003-11-23
Posts 10Florida |
A nice poem for a friend maybe she will see this and contact you ...Rita Family and friend are a blessing always treat them the way you would want them to treat you [This message has been edited by Rita 3 (11-23-2003 07:58 PM).] |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
This is so sad, and yet so sweet and beautiful. Hugs Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
funny how we're always missing someone. enjoyed this, Lady. How have you been? I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
and am waiting to hear the call from the blue so I can serenade again, with you. sad and touching. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i miss her too hope she checks in soon, also raffi too, if youre reading |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very nice and tender writing....enjoyed the well thought out words...thank you.... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' [This message has been edited by Goldenrose (11-24-2003 09:54 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Blusie Girl will appreciate this a bunch M. Happy holidays to you and thank you for being so kind.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
....sigh...trying, but...no luck. I'll go over to her house and drag her in here if necessary...... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ [This message has been edited by Ratleader (11-25-2003 12:48 AM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
as always your words hit hard... very strong write, of emotion...could clearly feel this one! keep writing girlie... take care amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautifully sad, but that's what we do best, ey? |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beautiful plea for the return of a friend... She is definitely missed... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
yes both her and her words are sorely missed and this is a lovely way for you to honor her. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh how very lovely this was. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Rita 3, hopefully she will come and take a peek and know that she is missed. Thank you Skyfire, I am just saddened by her disappearance on here. Temptress, nice to see you. I am fine, thank you...just doing the neccessary  ambrish, Blues Serenade seems to be taking a break from here..I just wanted her to know I miss her and her poetry. Hey there Michele, haven't heard a thing yet...but will keep on trying. hugs M Goldenrose, thank you for your kind response M Larry C, well where have you been hiding. I hope all is well with you and yours...miss you, too.  M Ed, did you really go over to her house and try dragging her? You made me smile just thinking about it. M |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Awww, you didn't have to do this, but I'll bump it up anyways. I'm spinning pretty fast in my own little whirlwind these days~ While singing the same old song, lala lala lala... Just get me past the holidays this year, and I'll be fine. Miss you, Maur~ (you've got mail) and thank you everyone for saying what you said. I'm a big girl, I think. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Finally... so glad to know you are ok.And now you have mail!!! Take care and many love you, Lori M |
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