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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2003-11-23 12:00 PM


synapse

stars twinkle
pieces of His love
comets stream
His awesome power
across the heavens

galaxies float
in rhythm, in tandem
with His perfect plan

©October 11, 2003

A Chorus of Life


little junkos
flit, flit, flit

peck and play
while I sit

©October 31, 2003

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2003 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2003-11-23 12:03 PM


Perfectly beautiful acknowledgement of His plan.
Love, Margherita

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-11-23 12:08 PM


love that Chorus of Life...nice to see your words again, Virginia
*s
M

and hey, I was wondering about those shorts at this time of year j/k

ecrivan
Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
3 posted 2003-11-23 12:11 PM


I admire the celestial melody...but think the plan is lightyears from perfect..that's explains why we're here!(oh! so cynical this morn). Good write


VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
4 posted 2003-11-23 12:16 PM


Thanks, all, and nakdthoughts, maybe they're shorts from down under,(southern hemisphere), of course then they'd be "undershorts"

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

[This message has been edited by VAS (11-23-2003 03:30 PM).]

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
5 posted 2003-12-23 10:57 PM


Beautifully laid out!  BEEEEEEEwell!
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