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My Eyes have seen
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My Eyes have seen |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My Eyes have seen My eyes have seen the glory dream Mortar and pestle ground to seem A piecrust made of mud and dust Filled with rust of wanderlust Cooked with spicy spirits dare Under desires flame of flair Phantoms bringing fantasy To butter my bread with ecstasy Ecstasy ground from agony A step away from blasphemy Stolen from epiphany’s chest Epitome to a wave of bless Do I cut the pie too thin? Would you say I do a sin? Is my soul not free to choose? What I say, am I to loose? I slowly peel the dust to be Give me dreams or liberty. [This message has been edited by Nan (11-23-2003 08:13 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Get those blackbirds out of that pie... another one for the library, Sy... good Sunday morning to you!  |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I don't think you cut the pie too thin, dear Sy... You just keep on cutting away...  |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
I like this very much, at least the rhyme and way it reads. Some phrase I not understand full, but liberty is a dear emotion to me |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning read Sy! Have time to stop for tea? ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine And a  and hug for you.Nan How about a morning hug? Lotus Thank you for the like. Nancy My pleasure. |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Smile i had the feeling of curriosity in life as i read this. enjoyed Smile Jes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jes Thanks for the smile. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Cooked with spicy spirits dare Under desires flame of flair Phantoms bringing fantasy To butter my bread with ecstasy Ooooh, what a wonderful Sunday morn write this is Seymour !! Butter tarts with your tea? Alrighty then.  hugs, Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Sounds just lovely to me. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
We need to believe in our dreams of glory ... even if at times they do not manifest. Beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita Thank you sweet. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOYED  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Tank you so much. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
would you like your pie ala mode? *L* how bout with a side of *winkies* or some smoochie sprinkles lest not forget the Randy Raspberries |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I'll have a portion of that. WWRS |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Mr. T. ~ ~ May pie and buttered bread bring the ecstasy and liberty to your dreams that you so richly deserve!  Loveya, T-Man! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Now only an Angel could wish me that. |
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Varuch Elohim Junior Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 41Italy |
Ecstasy ground from agony A step away from blasphemy Stolen from epiphany’s chest Epitome to a wave of bless Great work...look forward to reading more. Varuch Elohim |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
You made me think. Now I probably need a nap. Thanks! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Another fabulous piece of writing, Seymour. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Varuch, Thank you for the read and reply. icebox, The same thing happens to me. LOL Suetang Thank you dear. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I am certain that by this time....the pie is an empty plate without crumbs... But that is okay....keeping my Colesterol in check (NOT!) I think you shall have plenty of dreams to keep your plate filled with delicious pie.. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
You baked a wonderful write for us today, Sy!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Cooked with spicy spirits dare Under desires flame of flair Phantoms bringing fantasy To butter my bread with ecstasy Yum, Yum.. Enjoyed SG |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you barry. scorpio Nice of you to say so. SimplyGold Glad you enjoyed. |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
that was awesome...i liked it thanks for puttin it up We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies. Dimmu Borgir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Snowflake glad you liked it. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, your perfect rhyme amazes me. I love it!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, Whatever your knife renders is the perfect slice of life. and whatever your pen bestows, is beautiful. Thank you, master scultor and poet. Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sweet Ethel, Thank you so much, Elizabeth, Thank you love. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey SY . . . adore the sing-songy rhythm of this just slipped right off the page . . . Mortar and pestle ground to seem A piecrust made of mud and dust Filled with rust of wanderlust Beautiful lines SY always xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always amazing  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
littlewing You are a dear, thank you. Passing, And thank you sweet. |
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