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Adagio
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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like a melody, unending . . . your finger tip dances stringing serenity bending notes into liquid gold melding strum slide by side as lovers collapse my breath taking with them my heart as each pad graces, languid releasing chord to flight f a l l i n g in time, brushing Just upon my lips pursed in wait of kiss [This message has been edited by littlewing (11-23-2003 07:47 AM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
lovely, i could hear the flutes, the harps , the calling of love with a dove flying overhead, nice music for yoga or actaully something a bit more "involved" than yoga very nice |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!!!!! Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
littlewing Love to watch you fly. |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Cute Smile Jes |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
beautiful! ~K~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh yes, dear Sue, "adagio" is the right rhythm/tempo for these wondrous moments. So beautiful! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Love AND talent... ...all at the same moment! Isn't life grand!!! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh that lucky boy..... and in so many ways. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
wonderful...music brings the best out of us all joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yoga!??..what is more involved than Yoga.. DON'T say it!! Excellently done, bringing the poem right to where it should lie. Yes, nice.. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
"bending notes into liquid gold" Oh I love this... Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and this. . . this speaks volumes. . .I can hear the Bach adagio now littlewing. . . wonderfully done. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- I am tired . . . |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"your finger tip dances stringing serenity bending notes into liquid gold melding strum slide by side as lovers collapse my breath taking with them my heart" Sue?...this is absolutely gorgeous... it whispers with a feather's touch Love it, my sis...and love you...  When the power of love overcomes the |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
How elequently and elegantly delicate. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
that'sit.littlewingihatetodosuchatragicthing  butihavetoaddyoutomylibraryi'vejustputitofffortoolongmyfriend.iloveyourpoetryandeventhenew pictureyouhaveforyourprofileisgreatxoxoluvya-River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Ah this is beautiful so tender... love it. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Bootieful!  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele . . eheheh YESSS thank you happy you could hear the music too Thank you Eric Aww Sy . . you are so sweet thank you Thank you Jes Hey K - thank you Margherita yes indeed thank you so much icey? you are so sweet and yes . . thank you Ed? *smiling here* much much too good to me thank you tuesday? it sure does, you said it thank you Hey Barry , ahaha yes for sure . . exactly where it needs to be . . *smile* thank you Hey SKy . . thank you soo much I really liked that line too *smile* Sven . . ahh Sven YES actually adagio for strings yes? thank you Vic? a feathers touch - God now that was beautiful . . thank you love you too sista steven - how very nice thank you *smile* HeyRiverLMAOyesIdoliketypinglikethis andsohappythatyoustillareyouseemaybe justmaybenobodywillpayattentiontous whenwewritelikethisandthankyoufor suchasweetresponseandforthecomments onmypicturesmile Alyssa? ahh so so true tender it is indeed . . . thank you Hey Sharon TANKA! James? nice . . silky . . I like that Thank you guys xxoo |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Hi Sugar This nearly slipped away before I could reply. Pretty music made here. pretty music surrounds you.  Isleofview "In looking Northward, I see a light" |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is so lovely....just as the poet that penned it.... hugssssssLauren~ I had a dream last night |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have 2 Adagio CD's and they put me in alpha states faster that you can say, "sleep"! lol This poem is a work of art!  Linda |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully written, you have a thoughtful heart....kind and devoted...thanks so much for sharing. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
wonderfully done |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome format and theme...you always do well |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Your words left me wanting to pick up one of my 6-strings... but alas, I can not until the afternoon is over. Enjoyed! "If this grand panorama before me is what you call God...then God is not dead." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Oh Sue, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love the trickling feel of this, yay, you let everything flow in rhythm, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
come on in and take a bow..... you are surely missed |
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