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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-11-23 02:39 AM

Make Me Your Ocean

Kelly Kim, come
and embrace me again.
Wrap your arms
around me in
one smooth motion.
Swim into me,
make me your ocean.
I'll take you where
you want to go.
Caressing your heart.
Immersing your soul.

JamesLee
November21
2003

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-11-23 03:46 AM

who could resist?

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-11-23 08:23 AM

if i am your ocean,
will you be my sky
to wrap me and shelter
me from the storms borne
inside

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-11-23 08:50 AM

James,
Not bad, enjoyed.

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

4 posted 2003-11-23 09:32 AM

Thats a hug.

Smile

Jes

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2003-11-23 10:13 AM

Hope she answers *s

M

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2003-11-23 11:01 AM

Loving this really, one of your best!
Love, Margherita

Hockeychick19
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

7 posted 2003-11-23 12:20 PM

Oh James that's so sweet. I hope your wishes come true.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

Eloise
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since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

8 posted 2003-11-23 12:37 PM

Excellent read James. Enjoyed this one.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2003-11-23 12:39 PM

Show her this poem and she'll be swimming into you faster than you can say "Don Ho"! lol

Huggums,
EA

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

10 posted 2003-11-23 04:09 PM

Wonderful writing here James.

"I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you"

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

PseudoPoet
Junior Member

since 2003-11-23

Posts 18

11 posted 2003-11-23 04:24 PM

Really liked this write.

SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

12 posted 2003-11-23 07:05 PM

Wow, lot's of passion here. I'm swooning.

Lovely, JM

SG

Varuch Elohim
Junior Member

since 2003-11-10

Posts 41
Italy

13 posted 2003-11-23 07:27 PM

Very beautiful and passionate poem. I enjoyed the read. Thank you

Varuch

Rita 3
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since 2003-11-23

Posts 10
Florida

14 posted 2003-11-23 08:14 PM

James, a great read thanks for sharing...Rita

Family and friend are a blessing always treat them the way you would want them to treat you

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

15 posted 2003-11-23 11:35 PM

Nice...very very nice....

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CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

16 posted 2003-12-17 01:07 PM

James, this is soooooooo sweet & precious of a read...
Loved it PoetFriend...
Smiles2u
*~coco~*

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

17 posted 2003-12-17 01:59 PM

James,

beautiful! my favorite of yours so far.
Excellent writing...

Happy Holidays,
Amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

18 posted 2003-12-17 02:38 PM

one of your best, I think

really, liked this very much

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

19 posted 2004-11-19 11:40 PM

I thank you all for the kind words...James

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