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Make Me Your Ocean

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 11-23-2003 02:39 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

Make Me Your Ocean

Kelly Kim, come
and embrace me again.
Wrap your arms
around me in
one smooth motion.
Swim into me,
make me your ocean.
I'll take you where
you want to go.
Caressing your heart.
Immersing your soul.

JamesLee
November21
2003
© Copyright 2003 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced


1 posted 11-23-2003 03:46 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

who could resist?
inkedgoddess
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2 posted 11-23-2003 08:23 AM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

if i am your ocean,
will you be my sky
to wrap me and shelter
me from the storms borne
inside
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 11-23-2003 08:50 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

James,
Not bad, enjoyed.
Jes
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4 posted 11-23-2003 09:32 AM       View Profile for Jes   Email Jes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jes

Thats a hug.

Smile

Jes

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


5 posted 11-23-2003 10:13 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Hope she answers  *s

M
Margherita
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Eternity


6 posted 11-23-2003 11:01 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Loving this really, one of your best!
Love, Margherita
Hockeychick19
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7 posted 11-23-2003 12:20 PM       View Profile for Hockeychick19   Email Hockeychick19   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Hockeychick19's Home Page   View IP for Hockeychick19

Oh James that's so sweet. I hope your wishes come true.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

Eloise
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8 posted 11-23-2003 12:37 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Excellent read James.  Enjoyed this one.
Earth Angel
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Show her this poem and she'll be swimming into you faster than you can say "Don Ho"! lol

Huggums,
EA
Suetang
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10 posted 11-23-2003 04:09 PM       View Profile for Suetang   Email Suetang   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suetang

Wonderful writing here James.

"I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you"

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

PseudoPoet
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11 posted 11-23-2003 04:24 PM       View Profile for PseudoPoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PseudoPoet

Really liked this write.
SimplyGold
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12 posted 11-23-2003 07:05 PM       View Profile for SimplyGold   Email SimplyGold   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SimplyGold

Wow, lot's of passion here. I'm swooning.

Lovely, JM

SG
Varuch Elohim
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13 posted 11-23-2003 07:27 PM       View Profile for Varuch Elohim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Varuch Elohim

Very beautiful and passionate poem. I enjoyed the read. Thank you

Varuch
Rita 3
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14 posted 11-23-2003 08:14 PM       View Profile for Rita 3   Email Rita 3   Edit/Delete Message      Click to visit Rita 3's Home Page   View IP for Rita 3

James, a great read thanks for sharing...Rita

Family and friend are a blessing always treat them the way you would want them to treat you

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15 posted 11-23-2003 11:35 PM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

Nice...very very nice....

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CocoBaci
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16 posted 12-17-2003 01:07 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

James, this is soooooooo sweet & precious of a read...
Loved it PoetFriend...
Smiles2u
*~coco~*
Aimster
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17 posted 12-17-2003 01:59 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

James,

beautiful! my favorite of yours so far.
Excellent writing...

Happy Holidays,
Amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

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with you


18 posted 12-17-2003 02:38 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

one of your best, I think really, liked this very much
JamesMichael
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19 posted 11-19-2004 11:40 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I thank you all for the kind words...James
 
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