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Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2003-11-22 11:55 PM


Dear Gentle Spirit, you always
Open your heart for all to read
Never a doubt of your friendship
Natural and special grace
A beautiful butterfly, sister of my heart

~~**~~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

© Copyright 2003 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-11-22 11:58 PM


Yes, Dear Lauren, that is our Gentle Spirited One.

A hug for each of you:
Linda

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2 posted 2003-11-23 12:11 PM


You captured her perfectly.....

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Margot
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3 posted 2003-11-23 12:21 PM


Greeneyes,

Beautiful

Margot

Eloise
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4 posted 2003-11-23 12:25 PM


What a tender write you placed here.  Enjoyed it very much.
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5 posted 2003-11-23 01:39 AM


Nice dedication


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6 posted 2003-11-23 01:47 AM


This is beautiful, Lauren. You wrote
our Donna perfectly.  
Hugs  
Ethel

(and  THANK  YOU, my friend. I appreciate you.)

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7 posted 2003-11-23 03:41 AM


just beautiful!
marcel
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8 posted 2003-11-23 04:35 AM


beautifully written! short and sweet.
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9 posted 2003-11-23 05:56 AM


Beautiful Lauren
you have captured her beautifully
xxoo

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10 posted 2003-11-23 07:24 AM



She is that.  A beautiful little treasure
for her to print off and keep close.
Well done, from one lovely lady, to another!

Margherita
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11 posted 2003-11-23 11:37 AM


So lovely!
And I agree.
Love, Margherita

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12 posted 2003-11-23 12:25 PM


a lovely acrostic, Lauren
*s
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13 posted 2003-11-23 12:29 PM


Lovely, especially:

"Natural and special grace"

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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14 posted 2003-11-23 04:34 PM


Wonderful devotion, dedication..
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15 posted 2003-11-23 04:37 PM


This is so true.
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16 posted 2003-11-23 04:46 PM


Lauren-

this was lovely! but then again
your work always is...
hugs
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

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17 posted 2003-11-23 06:28 PM


Breathtaking Lauren!
And this describes her so well.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

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18 posted 2003-11-24 05:54 AM


L, I have been away from the computer for a few days.  I can not think of a finer gift to come back to.  This is as special to me as your friendship is and will be treasured just as much.   too sister.  ~D~

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

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19 posted 2003-11-28 05:48 PM




(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwwwww, this is such a beautiful friendship gift to someone so deserving, sweet friend, God Bless You, you both are gentle spirited friends to our hearts, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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20 posted 2003-12-05 11:40 PM


That's a good friend, and you are so thoughtful, Lauren.  
Huggin'you both~

I gotta go see what else you wrote~  

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