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mytuesdaywishes
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since 2003-09-05
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a voice from the musicbox

0 posted 2003-11-22 09:53 PM


remember me in shades of green
and the tie-dyed shapes you photographed
remember my toes and dancer feet
remember my eyes, you called them gems
remember my voice, broken but beautiful
i sang you to sleep sometimes
remember the coffee in my sugar
remember the languages we knew
and the multphonics we spoke in
remember the late-night scribblings
and the spontaneous embraces
remember the stories we created
just to tell when we were through
remember my hands, they were so small
but you held them when i cried
remember this, my love for you
but dont remember me

joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless...

© Copyright 2003 Rachael - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2003-11-23 02:25 AM


Nice writing...James
passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-11-23 03:53 AM


coffee in my sugar...

yep, you sound like me

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