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superman piano |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox 
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play like a hero live like a song strike like a pedal tone put the damage on pound it out like genius force feed the passion separate the gravity illuminate abstraction cut like a soprano thunder like a bass believe in absolution beautify the space climb into the refrain impel dynamic rage bend erruptive barlines cast chords off the page sputter like a nimbus anticipate the fall be a superman piano be the one who saves us all joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless... |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
this reminds me of a friend I have.. and when he plays it just brings you to tears, I don't know how he does it, but he just plays with such feeling its like you're reading him... awesome write. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'd like to hear this sung outloud, with 'lectronic drums and keyboard. A fun read! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"play like a hero, be the one who saves us all"....this is a great poem! I heard every note and felt every bit of thunder. Nice work. ~K~ |
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