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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Too warm today too sunny for the season or my mood still I allowed myself to be warmed, passively winter sun and smoke stream through my window drawing breath, blinking eye against the light, I wake and I sleep... everything is the same today as yesterday except yesterday you loved me |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Pluck on those strings, why don't you... you know the ones... attached to the heart? |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, I would say that was a big difference. LOL |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I was lazily reading along, enjoying the sun and ambiance ~ and then, whammo! I almost broke into tears! Warm, comforting hugs, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Damn.... just damn. ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
how quickly things change...dont really realize it till the next day, when something's different. the world turns quicker than we can suppose. joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless... |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
oh ouch! This one just pulled me in then spit me out into the fire! Well done...! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
wow, gut-punch ending. good write! ~K~ |
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Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
Beautifully written. Sad, of course, but beautiful. Margot |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Jiminy is sniffling. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 gawd! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I DO LOVE YOU TODAY TOOOOOOO!!!!!!! If that's a comfort to you......  Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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