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vandana
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0 posted 2003-11-22 06:05 PM


~NewEnglandlazurlu~

November rain
Light thin and shallow
Comes the winter and dark bites deep
In twilight where shadows creep
Dusk where spirits would pause and sleep

~Vandana~

November rain
And then comes the winter dawn
With the shadows of nights
While fields of gold
Still growing
And wondered where stars
shone bright

[This message has been edited by vandana (11-22-2003 07:41 PM).]

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Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 2003-11-22 06:14 PM


Lovely and soothing  -  Twice!
Thank you!
Liz

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-11-22 07:18 PM


West meets East in a most delightful and poetic way! Lovely poem by two lovely poetesses!

Warm huggums to each of you!

Linda

Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-11-22 07:25 PM



Very lovely...quite a collaboration, you two!  Duet again!

Copperbell
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4 posted 2003-11-22 08:08 PM


nice,  I really liked it

Enchantress
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5 posted 2003-11-22 08:09 PM


Very very lovely...much enjoyed!
Hug to you both~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-11-23 04:23 AM


this is quite beautiful
Hockeychick19
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7 posted 2003-11-23 12:05 PM


Beautiful duet... I love it.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

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Gaia
8 posted 2003-11-23 01:20 PM


BRAVO!
This is really beautiful! Thanks to both poets!

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