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the no-time of a bathroom

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duncan idaho
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dune


0 posted 11-22-2003 05:33 PM       View Profile for duncan idaho   Email duncan idaho   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for duncan idaho

i dropped out of sight
in the bathroom wall
leaped to the bulbs
and crawled back to.

damn, that hurt.

saw myself a sharp
% flea of me. nothing more.
saw myself flexing rigid
muscles of useless organic
flesh. and I cringed
at my disability.............#
living. in that period.
dot of me and dot of
you
doesn't really matter too much
somehow, i'm still here and so am
I.
so there you I am.
an observation of me, observing what I observe.
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ecrivan
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my own state


1 posted 11-22-2003 08:27 PM       View Profile for ecrivan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ecrivan's Home Page   View IP for ecrivan

Did write a poem once called "The Dot" and another about viewing the nearby world from an ancient outcrop in Victoria, Australia...quite like the aspect of being able to see oneself from the outside....and as objectively as this life permits...welcome to Passions and keep the ideas flowing

GG
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Lost in thought


2 posted 11-23-2003 11:51 PM       View Profile for GG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GG

looks like a mirrow examination to me
this is amusing, I like it!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


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Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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