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The Downfall of Respect.....
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The Downfall of Respect..... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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There was need electric blue need for the weakness ~a kind of harsh light Shone truer than pale soothing yellow there was soft focus where naked eye needed vision A filtered view decieving view of holy respect waning ~the fall of thorns My God fallen beside the core of apple The sneer of blame upon womans shoulder we shall always be carrier for the downfall for all could never be the fault of a man ~oh no There is no pride in hearing myself say your name in perfect timed synchronicity as if one word ~disrespect~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I've heard that word over and over so many times I could scream...and it's always said by a man |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"There is no pride in hearing myself say your name in perfect timed synchronicity as if one word ~disrespect~" Incredible verse gem...enjoyed.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your mind is one of poetic genius, dear gem drop!  I've been missing your poetry ~ and your smile. Love ya! LL |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Stunning...(as usual!) Eric |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
electric blue need for the weakness ~a kind of harsh light Shone truer than pale soothing yellow there was soft focus where naked eye needed vision your pen flows with a magic touch , something fragile , a high praise to you gem |
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