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The Downfall of Respect.....

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gemjop
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0 posted 11-22-2003 02:40 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for gemjop

There was need
electric blue need
for the weakness
~a kind of harsh light

Shone truer
than pale soothing yellow
there was soft focus
where naked eye needed vision

A filtered view
decieving view
of holy respect waning
~the fall of thorns

My God
fallen beside
the core of apple

The sneer of blame
upon womans shoulder
we shall always be carrier
for
the downfall
for all
could never be the fault of a man
~oh no

There is no pride
in hearing myself say
your name
in perfect timed synchronicity
as if one word
~disrespect~
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passing shadows
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1 posted 11-22-2003 03:08 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I've heard that word over and over so many times I could scream...and it's always said by a man
Duncan
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2 posted 11-22-2003 03:23 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

"There is no pride
in hearing myself say
your name
in perfect timed synchronicity
as if one word
~disrespect~"

Incredible verse gem...enjoyed.  
Earth Angel
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3 posted 11-22-2003 04:12 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Your mind is one of poetic genius, dear gem drop!

I've been missing your poetry ~ and your smile.

Love ya!
LL
Ericc
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4 posted 11-23-2003 08:19 AM       View Profile for Ericc   Email Ericc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ericc

Stunning...(as usual!)

Eric
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5 posted 02-13-2004 06:25 AM       View Profile for aujussy wolf   Email aujussy wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aujussy wolf


electric blue need
for the weakness
~a kind of harsh light

Shone truer
than pale soothing yellow
there was soft focus
where naked eye needed vision
your pen flows with a magic touch , something fragile , a high praise to you gem

 
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