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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-11-22 01:12 PM



Holidays

These are the special times,
those I mind sweep day to day
wondering if all is left behind
and if ever I will feel
those special times again.

Music running backward memories
tuning me into sensitivities hardened
as I sing inward in silent voice
of experiences awaiting their new verses
if and ever when.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2003-11-22 01:18 PM


M, I don't think we can ever move on to the future when weighted down in the past


nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-11-22 01:29 PM


and who ever thought we would have to...

M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-22-2003 01:30 PM).]

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3 posted 2003-11-22 09:58 PM


Maureen, the holidays can be sad sometimes.
Hugs to you sweet lady  
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-11-22 10:48 PM


Maureen, I know just what you mean, and you say it well.  Sigh.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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5 posted 2003-11-22 11:39 PM


"Music running backward memories
tuning me into sensitivities hardened
as I sing inward in silent voice
of experiences awaiting their new verses
if and ever when."

Oh-so-nice! Great technique here, working around a really original idea.... taking it backward all the way....wish I'd thought of it!

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nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2003-11-23 05:54 PM


Ethel,  yes, very sad when you can't share with  one you would like to.
hugs to you

Nan...thanks


Ed, thank you, never thought of it as being original..just words that took me back a bit and me liking to give them a slight twist


M  

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