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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-11-22 11:35 AM





When I am ready to slip
into yonder clouds and skies of blue

I will remember how you took my hand
and helped me cross raging rivers,
climb mountains too high
for me to see
beyond
my own shortsightedness.

Thanking you,
well in advance.


© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-11-22 01:23 PM


there are always those you can count on, ey?

Nice write...I can think of a few I could send this to, on a greeting card

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2 posted 2003-11-22 01:27 PM


Dixie, by all means, feel free to copy this and add your own thoughts to it, to send along to a friend.
Thanks for reading and replying. Hope you have a great weekend.

Hockeychick19
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3 posted 2003-11-22 06:45 PM


Kacy this is great... I have a lot of friends I know I could read that to and they would cry out of happiness for sure.  

~Kelly~


Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

[This message has been edited by Hockeychick19 (11-22-2003 06:46 PM).]

Enchantress
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4 posted 2003-11-22 08:19 PM


How beautiful!
I can imagine receiving this on a card...lovely.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

mytuesdaywishes
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5 posted 2003-11-22 10:07 PM


i agree with passing shadows, this is one for hallmark, very nicely put

joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless...

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