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RSWells
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0 posted 2003-11-22 08:49 AM



That 42 degree day found the Merrimack
full and towering Red Maple's broad
leaves mostly fallen and burnt in death.
Yet some splay in rust with yellow veins.

A pair of New Hampshire state employees
walked off the late lunch of the near
retired, past Franklin Pierce's grave
as cool winds ushered on November's debris.

One reach down to snag a leaf from the
low growing Checkerberry, pinching it
to draw it's wintergreen scent.

A slightly warmer Scranton found young
mothers pass the last school hours in
Nay Aug Park. Littered with dark brown
acorns it's Northern Red Oak skirted

with deep furrowed bark, branches still
clinging to most it's bright red, sharp
point leaves. Large Fothergilla shrubs
display blue-green and russet leaves.

Two boys play hooky in the tallest oak
after tiring of skipping rocks across
the Lackawanna River.

A third generation dairy farmer sat quiet
on an Appalachian ridge over Henry Lake.
He lean against the marbled trunk of a
Paperbark Maple and watched the V shaped

valley for a deer. In the lower 47 degree
vale on loamy soil grew Wintersweet, sparsely
displaying sulpher yellow flowers. He drew
on his Lucky Strike not caring if he saw prey.

He was content with the fragrance and
peace of his beloved Tennessee.

In Dallas it was 58 degrees.
A limousine sped to a hospital
with a dead man and his pretty wife.

© Copyright 2003 Richard S. Wells jr. - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-11-22 08:50 AM


I remember.
Welcome home!

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2 posted 2003-11-22 08:55 AM


RSWells
Nice to see you back, well done and I was dreaming till you brought me back. Enjoyed

Dee
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3 posted 2003-11-22 09:18 AM


Interesting peice, thought provoking. And what were you doing that day?

Dee

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4 posted 2003-11-22 09:52 AM


Were you one of the boys playing hooky that day?
I was sitting in my French class, reciting passages from Voltaire and Rousseau for an oral exam. The screams in the hallway stopped me in mid-sentence....it was one of those moments burned into the core of forever. Camelot had fallen.

Richard, it's so good to read you again, you have been greatly missed.

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5 posted 2003-11-22 10:06 AM


OMG richard...i am so happy to see you...e mail me...helen (great poetry btw as always)
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6 posted 2003-11-22 10:24 AM


As vivid as yesterday.
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7 posted 2003-11-22 01:49 PM


glad to have a repost...good to have you back around
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8 posted 2003-11-22 02:30 PM


It's nice to read you again. I think those of us old enough will always remember exactly what they were doing at the moment they heard about this tragedy.
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9 posted 2003-11-22 04:17 PM


This poem I had not forgotten. It has as much impact on me now as it did the first time that I read it. You are a marvellous poet, Dear Richard, and you have been sorely missed.

Warm, welcome-back hugs, (you are back?!?)
Linda

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10 posted 2003-11-22 05:26 PM


I still feel the pain of that day even now, and with all the televised documentaries over the past week, it has rekindled many old feelings as has your great poem.  Welcome back Richard, nice to read you once more.
RSWells
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11 posted 2003-11-22 06:53 PM


Thank you my friends, sorry I've been away. Too many reasons to go into.


I was a 10 year old boy attending Saint Bonaventure Catholic school in Pittsburgh that friday afternoon. The entire school was in a church service when the nuns whispered down the pews "The president's been shot....the president's been shot"
I recall sitting on our sunporch watching TV that Sunday and seeing Oswald silenced. The incident has had a lifelong effect on me and doubtless help contribute to my anti-establishment attitude.

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12 posted 2003-11-22 09:47 PM


in far rockaway ,queens, new york, a freckled face chubby little girl, that would one day become a siren, sat eating her curds and whey wondering why the teachers were all crying and sending us home......
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Canada eh.
13 posted 2003-11-22 09:50 PM


Well said Mr. Wells.
We will never forget that day.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

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14 posted 2003-11-23 08:08 PM


I followed you south just now...
me? all I can remember is being in chorus when the news came over the intercom...and then actually watching the shooting of Oswald on tv as it was happening...

nice to see you again
M

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