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Treat Me Nice

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 11-21-2003 11:39 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

Treat Me Nice

So now you want to treat
me the way I've always
wanted to be treated.
With dignity and respect
and a positive flow of energy.
This is the love that I desire.
This is the true meaning
of love to me.
Truthfully nothing
less will do.
If you say you love me
than let your actions
follow through.
Treat me nice and
perhaps I will fall
in love with you.

JamesLee
November20
2003
© Copyright 2003 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
azblond
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since 07-01-99
Posts 651
The Steamy Desert


1 posted 11-22-2003 01:03 AM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

Awh...this is so sweet!  The perfect guideline for what it takes is so simple but sometimes too obvious.  I loved it!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~


2 posted 11-22-2003 04:11 AM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

This is so sweet, and asks nothing more than we all want, respect, and dignity. Nice!
Love,
Terri~
passing shadows
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3 posted 11-22-2003 04:52 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

ah, to fall in love so easily....those days are so gone for me
A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 11-22-2003 08:45 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

so true...love is nothing without actions to back up the words..being a writer/poet..words can sometimes be words..but actions speak louder than words..actions seal the love..making it real..truth!

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~
JamesMichael
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5 posted 12-16-2003 11:22 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you azblone, SharaRose, passing shadows and A Romantic Heart...yes, its so easy to lie...actions tell the real story...James
 
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