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Open Poetry #29

Back Door Serenade

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

0 posted 2003-11-21 10:59 PM

Back door of the home but in the front
appreciate clear entrance ways...better stunts
I had my door fly off of a hinge,
I wasn't on any alcoholic binge

Now for one man to lift it and screw it back
after push and shove, the door needed slack,
before winter winds, had to remedy a chronic disrepair
My janitor sins, leaves his duties up in the air.

Now its back in place by some surprise
for the moment, I'll rethink his demise
'cause I need his good will whatever the cost
he knows to postpone, affect my interior loss..

A back door mount gone awry and in plain view
I may slide down unsalted stairs and want to sue..
but if I keep a damper on destructive thoughts
I may continue to produce quite a lot.

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (11-21-2003 11:03 PM).]

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2003-11-22 02:45 AM

giving this one a boost for another day of being viewed

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ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2003-11-22 06:28 PM

Thanks for giving me a boost there Temptress...have it in mind to be a distinctive as possible at as far as themes are concerned

you know for the most part I'm doing so that I can feel better about what I write.

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (11-22-2003 06:30 PM).]

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