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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-11-21 10:25 PM





I would like to tell you,
that your brief 2 minute entrance
into this 9-5 complacency,
it the ray of light each day
in this flourescent world
of the daily grind,

that the packages you bring
are the source of wonder and mystery
as we await your friendly smile,

that you're our link to the outside,
broadcaster of daily news and weather reports,
bringing light into this
windowless dungeon of the inane,

that these cliched conversations,
dont tell the vocabulary beneath your bright eyes,
that you too
have aspirations to fly,

i would like to tell you,
that you've become the latest source
of a wacky woman's numerous zany fantasies,

that some days when im alone in this office,
i would like to pull you
by your brown shirt,
take you across this desk,
and show you a good time,
wiping that shyness off of you,

then i'd like to follow you
out of this mundane place,
have your brown truck
become your private jet,
flying us off to our own island,

i would like to tell you
all of this and more,
each time you come into my space,
but then reality sends the message
that you're a working stiff like me,
and cannot be my sugar daddy,
but one that i'd surely
like to have on the side.

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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
1 posted 2003-11-22 02:49 AM


ROFL! I wonder how many people were afraid to reply to this because of the title! LOL! Pardon me...my mind is forever in some gutter it seem.

I think you should show this to "him".

Cute and direct writing, Lady.

Loving it...you made me laugh even if you didn't mean to.

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!


passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-11-22 03:01 AM


I got a UPS man I have an eye on too
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2003-11-22 07:50 AM


THANKS.....temptress, this guy has been
undressing me with his baby blues,  for the last year and a half, but cant get past "hello....how are u"

O yes , dixie, we all need a man with this nice package in our lives now and then, dont we?

ice
Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
4 posted 2003-11-22 11:09 AM


Good things also come in small packages if delivered properly ;-)

______ice
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James_A_Fraser
Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines
5 posted 2003-11-22 11:13 AM


Mmmmmmm.....naughty IS nice!



~~J

Midnitesun
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since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
6 posted 2003-11-22 11:45 AM


I sure enjoyed this fantasy!
I DO remember one particular UPS man years ago, and had similar thoughts to your shirt grabbing scene.

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