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Will He, Wil She?

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Magnus
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0 posted 11-21-2003 09:29 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Magnus

Gently, an ocean breeze tickling eyes blue
as a tear wells...as she wonders..
Will he?

Gently, a swell rises the bow, as salt spray
tickles a stubbled face...as he wonders....
Will she?

As waves do wash a windward shore, as mountains form behind.
as winds do sway the mighty trees, a love does grain the mind.
For of the night, the darkened night, a sailor sails the blue.
In search of gold on sail born flight, a lover ever true.

Gently, the skies caress the eyes, a northern course is set.
His mind behind, in want of her...this love he’ll not forget.
For of a day, another day, upon that windward shore
he swore to her, a love pristine,   to love her evermore.

To sail the sea from port to port and stand before the main
His heart would stay of her love true, until they meet again


© Copyright 2003 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 11-21-2003 09:33 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Magnus~
Oh sure ... Friday night ... home alone ... and you send a lovely such as this to mist my eyes~

It's just too, too beautiful~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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2 posted 11-21-2003 10:50 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


To the Lady on the Northern Shores...
smile...

the Knight is well worth the wait.

~&~

Magnus...a wonderful write.
azblond
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3 posted 11-22-2003 01:15 AM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

Bravo!!  

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

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whew...you sure have a way of telling a love story
ThisDiamond
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5 posted 11-22-2003 03:32 PM       View Profile for ThisDiamond   Email ThisDiamond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ThisDiamond's Home Page   View IP for ThisDiamond

Such seas could only be born of the Magnus.
TD
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"Will he? Will she?" ~ Will you?... lol

I jes luvs ta read ya, Poet Man!


EA
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Magnus,
   What can I say that hasn't been said?   You hold a special pen...
                            Sadelite
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nice write
Neeraja
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9 posted 11-23-2003 02:26 AM       View Profile for Neeraja   Email Neeraja   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Neeraja

My father was a sailor... I always loved the ocean... and a poem like this???  I love it!!!

Neeraja
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10 posted 11-23-2003 08:33 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

ahhhh. . . now this, this is good to read again my friend. . .

well done. . .

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I am tired . . .

LeeJ
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beautifully written Magnus...
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Beautifully written Indeed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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