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SimplyGold
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0 posted 2003-11-21 05:56 PM


Get it?

Just when I thought I had the answers
Bam, Bam right between the eyes
Just when I thought you were being straight
Bam, Bam you showed your true colors

Do I have to be hit by a Mac truck
to understand that what I want is not
always what I'll get
Ok already, I give up
So what if everyone is screwed up
Let't just not make this fish bowl any smaller
I get it..

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2003-11-21 10:13 PM


SimplyGold~
I like the directness of this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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2 posted 2003-11-22 05:50 PM


To finally "get it" can be a very painful process. But once you know and understand what you are dealing with, you can start making things right in your life.

This one packs a punch and shows that you are one step closer to regaining your personal power. You deserve only the best. May true happiness come your way.

Warm, healing hugs,
EA

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-22-2003 11:05 PM).]

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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3 posted 2003-11-22 11:18 PM


I love the energy in this one-the directness and vehemence. Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-11-23 04:08 AM


pretty neat
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