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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 11-21-2003 03:55 PM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

through the conundrums
of all that is
sounds of life enter
like songs of
rustling leaves

drumming in
thoughts
in wavy rhythms
spreading sure-footed beats
of priceless joy

that’s when
the newborn cries
in sparkling bundles of
free-flowing
energy

while young lungs breathe
gusts of fresh airs,
generations of elders
celebrate:
the future that is here

[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (11-21-2003 03:56 PM).]

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1 posted 11-21-2003 03:58 PM       View Profile for angelblueyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelblueyes

You sir are a master of words and thoughts.I loved every wrod of this.A new beginning, a new life, a new force to be heard and seen.Wonderful.
Crystal
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You paint with a steady brush, my friend. Excellent work here.

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It is a cycle always..and we are reminded of it and of the miracles..as well as the joys... with reminders such as this..

well done my friend.. well done indeed.

SharaRose
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4 posted 11-21-2003 06:40 PM       View Profile for SharaRose   Email SharaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SharaRose

The cycle of life. Very sweet thoughts.
Love,
Terri~
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enjoyed
James_A_Fraser
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I do enjoy looking out through your eyes. I'm enthralled by the way you look at things.



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Again, as always, fantastic!!  I especially love this stanza and the final statement..."the future is here."

that’s when
                       the newborn cries
                       in sparkling bundles of
                       free-flowing
                       energy

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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I am refreshed and renewed by your POV, Sudhir.
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wonderfully done! Thank you for the uplifting today!
Sudhir Iyer
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10 posted 11-27-2003 04:27 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

thanks for joining in the celebrations...

regards
sudhir
 
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