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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2003-11-21 03:55 PM


through the conundrums
of all that is
sounds of life enter
like songs of
rustling leaves

drumming in
thoughts
in wavy rhythms
spreading sure-footed beats
of priceless joy

that’s when
the newborn cries
in sparkling bundles of
free-flowing
energy

while young lungs breathe
gusts of fresh airs,
generations of elders
celebrate:
the future that is here

[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (11-21-2003 03:56 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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1 posted 2003-11-21 03:58 PM


You sir are a master of words and thoughts.I loved every wrod of this.A new beginning, a new life, a new force to be heard and seen.Wonderful.
Crystal

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2 posted 2003-11-21 04:30 PM


You paint with a steady brush, my friend. Excellent work here.

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3 posted 2003-11-21 05:27 PM


It is a cycle always..and we are reminded of it and of the miracles..as well as the joys... with reminders such as this..

well done my friend.. well done indeed.


SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-11-21 06:40 PM


The cycle of life. Very sweet thoughts.
Love,
Terri~

vandana
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5 posted 2003-11-21 06:47 PM


enjoyed
James_A_Fraser
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6 posted 2003-11-22 10:54 AM


I do enjoy looking out through your eyes. I'm enthralled by the way you look at things.



~~J

VAS
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7 posted 2003-11-22 11:52 AM


Again, as always, fantastic!!  I especially love this stanza and the final statement..."the future is here."

that’s when
                       the newborn cries
                       in sparkling bundles of
                       free-flowing
                       energy

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Midnitesun
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8 posted 2003-11-22 11:52 AM


I am refreshed and renewed by your POV, Sudhir.
passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-11-22 01:22 PM


wonderfully done! Thank you for the uplifting today!
Sudhir Iyer
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10 posted 2003-11-27 04:27 AM


thanks for joining in the celebrations...

regards
sudhir

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