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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA 
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If only you or anyone knew, The anger, frustration, and pain, With nothing here and nothing to gain, As salty tears run down my face I say why me, Why try so hard if you’re never right, Why bother to state fact or opinion if the fight never ends. If only it would all end. But it won’t it never will. Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
An excellent intense powerful pen, 'aye I felt it....well done indead |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Thank you very much Wintertao. ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That is such a frustrating and overwhelming place to be in. But thank God-ness! Those times do pass! ~ hopefully sooner rather than later! Life is full of surprises! I much prefer the good ones! Hang in there, Dear Kelly! ~ I am so glad that I did! ~ many times over during my lifetime thus far! You really managed to convey those feelings very well. Warm, healing hugs, EA |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Kelly - to-morrow is another day. Never give up & keep on smilin'. Bless You. Chris  "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
A very interesting piece. I enjoyed it. Well done indeed. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Linda thank you... I prefer the good things in life too. Chris thank you... you're a sweetheart. EvocativeVerse2 thank you... I'm glad you liked it. ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I know those moments... or rather, that life. Just keep on keepin' on.... you wrote it well. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Kelly, some days are so hard and it seems they will last forever. But hon, the sun will come out tomorrow and the world will look brighter. Keep writing, it's a wonderful way to get 'those' feels out and make you feel better. You could try screaming out the back door too!!!! Huggles, Marti |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Alyssa I think we all have those moments at some point in our lives... I'm very glad you liked it though. Marti thank you for your kind words. As far as taking your advice and screaming No!!! out the back door... I think I'll hold off on that because I wouldn't want to upset the neighbors. But thanks for the tip. ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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martina Member
since 2003-06-19
Posts 59 |
GREAT JOB GIRL |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Thanks Carrie. Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! [This message has been edited by Hockeychick19 (11-21-2003 11:40 PM).] |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Here's sending prayers your way, and a big hug, and know you aren't alone in feelings that despair you.  and more Love, Terri~  |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Terri thank you for the hugs I appreciate it. ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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