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steavenr
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0 posted 2003-11-21 01:20 PM


Sun

Sun bleeds softly down,
Casting silent shadow spears.
Into dusk, he speaks.

To Moon

O! Sweet Moon, 'tis thee
Passing in appointed rounds
Dost thou need? Need me!
Strong Sun with shadowing might,
Thou art seen in me tonight.

[This message has been edited by steavenr (11-23-2003 02:12 AM).]

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-11-21 01:22 PM


How very very lovely...
Congratulations on becoming a full member!
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Patricia
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Missouri
2 posted 2003-11-21 01:36 PM


This is absolutely beautiful.  My goodness, you write in such vivid and lovely images.  Me thinks I can learn a great deal from you, Sir.  

Wonderful work!  So glad you decided to join us.

Patricia

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2003-11-21 02:13 PM


ah....sigh...so lovely...

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2003-11-21 02:23 PM


From the Sun to the Moon to this reader's soul.

Simply beautiful...


EA

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just out of reach
5 posted 2003-11-21 02:24 PM


Just Lovely !
hugs, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



    

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