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Golden Beauty (For Ratleader)

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Bonnie j
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0 posted 11-21-2003 11:14 AM       View Profile for Bonnie j   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Bonnie j


Golden Beauty

A sea of golden beauty
floating on the wind swept
shores of humanity.
Sheer and wispy,
like that of angelhair,
with the glow of the sun
shining in a swirling mist of gold.
You walk through this golden beauty,
and it leaves a
spattering spray of gold
upon your dampened skin
and gently kisses your furrowed brow.
These sprays of gold
have been in your family for
three generations.
A life giving force
that touches your inner core.
You pray for rain-
You pray to be pestilence free
You pray for strength
Because
You help feed the world
You are the farmer of wheat
You are the farmer of golden beauty.

Love Bon-Bon

[This message has been edited by Bonnie j (11-21-2003 11:23 AM).]

© Copyright 2003 Bonnie j - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 11-21-2003 11:52 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

well, even though this is for him, I've read it and so happy I did, let me be the first to comment, what a journey this takes one on, and to boot a marvelous heartfelt caring tribute to a fine poet.

He'll love this...thanks Bon for sharing

Luv ya, Lee J.
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2 posted 11-21-2003 11:58 AM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

This is incredible...I don't know what to say...

Except thank you, from the very center of me... this is so beautiful!

I've been dejected lately, thinking that almost nobody here really liked me or my work, and that maybe I should just quietly fade away... but this is absolutely renewing! I can't thank you enough for it.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Bonnie j
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3 posted 11-21-2003 12:04 PM       View Profile for Bonnie j   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bonnie j

Thank you for your kind replies.
Lee J.
Big hug coming your way.
Ratleader
Sorry to hear you are down, but don't think of leaving I for one enjoy your work. I always read, but sometimes do not know what to say.
Glad you enjoyed.
Love
Bon-Bon


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4 posted 11-21-2003 12:32 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

You walk through this golden beauty,
and it leaves a
spattering spray of gold
upon your dampened skin
and gently kisses your furrowed brow.

How very beautiful! *S* And you couldn't have written for anyone more deserving... both your words and his renew and refresh... and bless the reader who stops to visit. *S*
passing shadows
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5 posted 11-21-2003 12:51 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

a very touching gift
Ratleader
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6 posted 11-21-2003 09:48 PM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

Back for a second look...and a second thank you. You made my day, and maybe my week.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 11-21-2003 10:07 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Bonnie~
Such a big heart you have~
I love the gentle of this~

RascalLeader .. you ain't going NOWHERE but here~
And that, sir, IS AN ORDER~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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inkedgoddess
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8 posted 11-21-2003 10:11 PM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

NO ONE IS LEAVING

there are no political prisoners here.......
though some of us have suffered a gag order once or twice
we are not being held hostage here,
we are free to leave,
but we choose to stay
NO ONE IS LEAVING
we are all one family under the sun
Martie
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9 posted 12-02-2003 07:35 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Bonnie...This is so sweetly written....makes me smile.
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