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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2003-11-21 10:45 AM



His spring board served wit
And sophistication
Dripping every passion
Into the soul
Like a mandolin on which
All winds may rightly feast
Serving summer days
of hidden spells
In a sparkling cave
of nightingales
Plausible in murmuring
paranormal seas
Lamping genius,
in a terrain of dreams
Where knowing
Paints lips quivering
Pure beauty, fervent limbs
where lovers are free
Of a somehow bigger
then life Greek serenity
It’s so easy
when the world is young
Gracing bloom
of circling orbs
Where soul and mind,
glimpse measureless symphonies
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I have been smitten
by your nations drawing assembly
Wondering whose orient
kneels on the threshold of dawning
Our passions spent…drifting lute of amethyst chorus
Silence makes our choice, and never parts us
Living in a lover’s poem with God-like forces
That ancient upward primal course
Distorts us to a seemingly curious concept
Ritual spaces where there are no rules or arguments
Nipping at our toes, hurling foamy seas
Penetrating youth, sojourn of treasuries
How steep the ring of milk, on wings of white doves
Bearing impassioned trees of golden love
Like me and you face to face and Spellbound
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Persuasive textures turn with dramatic proof
Nerves celestial in translation
The vein of physics making art with moving
Images, words essential embracing legal powers
Forming a fable taking unbridled format, exceeding hypnotic
Presented in the spaces left behind
Inviting us to turn our thinking
Into the now

© Copyright 2003 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-11-21 11:41 AM


LeeJ,
This is a marvellous write, I'd say an epopee.

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-11-21 11:50 AM


a whatty pee?????? But I don't have ta!!!!!hehehehheehe


Seriously Sy, muchos gracias

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