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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2003-11-21 08:33 AM


Sometimes it just tempts people to catch it,
Walking along in sneakers, quiet,
This distinctive rearrangement
Gathering dusk’s weightless balloons
Reaching a state were nothing seems real
Putting some effort into answers personable
With great forearms which reassure

This letter writer speaks of doing it all
Of things that only sun and time surfboard celestial
Holding hostage the squalls
With a tangle of baby-blue knitting, suckling,
Nudging deep plush ivory arm chairs, while
Talking with a slanting resolve, asking
“You’re Expecting Something?”

Their voices taken very clear.
Anonymous sounds that drift into twilight
Strolling under someone’s window
Recording upside down people
Sitting like humans in a theater

“I really believe they’re running…
From other people’s notions of their faulty self”
Then, stand up, taking a few steps onto emerald grass
Leaning towards a secret purpose, which nobody looks like.
Standing there waiting, waiting, with backs to good-byes
Crossing ankles, drawing sentences in our mind.
“We have been traveling for years, and we can’t stay
In one place, but must share expressions of surprise
As if your wondering how we’ve got here, borrowing medals
From the cosmos, hugging therapeutic things, way across the galaxies

What things were a little complicated on account
Have fallen down and dried into a vast array of
Silken arrangement, hibiscus, jasmine and roses
Garlanded with baby’s breath……..

Not looking up, but whirled around with
Muscular hands, lighting little yellow lamps
There, floats spiritual fireflies with uncertain expressions
And eyes not so much blue, as transparent…
Seeing right through the darkness, like silhouettes
Saying….
“Do you recognize me?” they inquire rather childlike while
Gathering sightseeing brochures
Pulling logical sounds from the night’s pregnant warm mouth.

“Let me tell you, we were very quiet”, they sang, “but planned”
“Think about it?” “Why don’t you just let go?”
And, as promised, mist, simply sifted in like happiness with
Distinctive features, painting a soft wardrobe with clothes
For my blushing naked, yet willing flesh.

“Unlimited the way was, joining in this summer evening sound,
Which hung on and on” sprawling out on the shoulder of a couch
Like mauve hued endless skies, puffing balanced bulletin boards
Showing the way…..

“Look here, take my picture”, pausing with a backward glace
Let’s watch a soft whiteout begin!  Becoming energetic expressions
Joining any choices, sliding scenery right underfoot, those busy
Little fireflies with antidotal mischievous thoughts.  “But then, whom
Am I to judge?” my mind smiled, while flying through the air
Weightlessly holding a million tiny hands…we giggled in thought

Rising and gliding faintly into a star-filled blue wonderland
With swift stairs pouring out, a happy childhood rolling groceries
Into my invisible home, filling my counters, refrigerator, you name it!

And I thought….

Where life grows to be dreams…fading little sketches of themselves
Drifting to be caught by the edge of promises…well! They assuredly
Kiss us, slowly unfolding and driven more intense
All you got to do is fill your mind with a sheet to fit it,
And with the sound of music….

I’d always been the kind to spend what I got when I got it
And I wasn’t sorry…
Nor did I borrow much from friends…friends who’d always seem
To have places to go and people to meet, although never left behind,
I opted for the library door, right outside my window
Being born right here, and all.

These eccentric places, making me see the softer eyes of
Something simpler, yet more…well, specifically, more pulling,
Like an invisible gravity ever present, just nudging you towards
What you didn’t know anything about, but knew was there.

There, adventure was all things wickedly unexpected yet good.
Where everything is realized while waiting for the train of
Feathered boats, finding birthday cakes, middle-aged varicose veins
Waiting their turns….
Fastening down the embers of self-consciousness and the simplest trip
For new shoes and a girl’s photo….mine

Releasing me in some way, allowing me to step back to a reasonable
Distance where unhampered views position themselves, oh maybe a bit tangled,
But…
Unaltered, just the way their supposed to be…yet ancient in air…
Where nothing moves for a very long time…
And the child who fell and cried, was now craving for some food
Out of season and way to expensive, but what the heck, you only live once
Right?

So I go and check my room

I study with a brimming smile, while sorting my bureau drawers
Totally unaware of the goings on outside, nor did it perchance me to care
As there may be some things I want burned, keeping only those
Things which match my eyes…no matter how old they are,
To me, they are flawless and have been handed down for centuries.
Keepsakes is what humans call them.

Tall dark and thin, my childhood eyes raised up to the flurry of innovations
Where I believe a single petal dances at dinner parties, from one end of
The cosmos to the other…
Hugging feelings passed onto trading glances of life…
Did you ever wonder why a dog circles before laying down?  It’s always right
There with him…the dog, I mean…in his mind….

Anyway, there, giant hollyhock plays hostess linking every sacred moment
To one another, understanding the velvet rose fastened to our bosoms.
Soaking right alongside of afternoons, rinsing heavy glass negatives
Under running water, splashing right across reflections of time.  Can you see
It?

“Oh how we manage to escape the outside world”! I warmly thought,
“We, writers of words”…
We see, feel and touch…such earthly possessions while sipping down life,

Content with this celestial navigation, with our acorns gathering closer
And all our ducks in a row…
All plump-faced, with the camera moving in, and up another summit we go
Traveling a corridor of private, sacred weather, though portals…
Urging us to wind our clocks…backwards if we must…for a time.
With words from outside the world…drumming a kindness of heart, beating &
Growing evermore fond of perception, and dancing at the Sophomore Prom of
Tomorrow’s travel…balanced…or so we believe, but do we really know, honestly?

In a world where love is moved by thought…and to, right
Where our church lives, inside our vestibule, of something invisible
Always there waiting…and it’s so God awful kind, caring, trusting, with a heart
Of it’s own, waiting, beating for the breath of hope…that all will see

Sometimes it just tempts people to catch it,
Walking along in sneakers, really quiet


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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-11-21 10:38 AM


LeeJ,
I do not know the subjugation of your youth
but I have a touch of the results. Your acceptence is within but your bouquets are
beautiful.

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
2 posted 2003-11-21 10:44 AM


Very nice write. Keep up the good work

                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
Graduation : January 29th 2004

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