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GG
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Lost in thought

0 posted 2003-11-21 03:36 AM



Tomorrow died some time ago
And I’ve been granting pills to toilets
Just to stop my mind from
Overfeeding misconceptions

Know the need to fight exists
And walls prepare my knuckles
For congruent altercations
Of the mind.

Heart prepares by losing love...
And tears are antiseptic
To what died
So long ago.



- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)


[This message has been edited by GG (11-21-2003 03:44 AM).]

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-11-21 04:03 AM


damn! don't you know I know about this!

hugs you

Jes
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Denmark
2 posted 2003-11-21 07:17 AM


So once we have found the day after tommorrow we shall again rise. And feel the love thats there.

So we can bring out the true inner smile.

Thanks for letting mee  read, i liked it.

Smile

Jes


LeeJ
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3 posted 2003-11-21 10:09 AM


words of a true course...God bless you
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2003-11-21 10:16 AM


GG,
"And tears are antiseptic" what a wonderful line.

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
5 posted 2003-11-21 11:10 AM


:'( Sounds like a very hurtful place to be.
Love,
Terri~

Hockeychick19
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6 posted 2003-11-22 02:47 AM


Alyssa this is a very painful write, but I like it. I hoope things get better for you.

Hugs
~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

GG
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Lost in thought
7 posted 2003-11-22 08:14 PM


Dix,
of course... you always do thanks, hugs...

Jes,
boy I sure hope so! Todays been the same with tomorrow dead for quite some time now though... but eventually, I imagine, things will change. Thanks

Always, Alyssa


- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

GG
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Lost in thought
8 posted 2003-11-22 08:16 PM


LeeJ,
lying got annoying when I realised it made me even more mad to say I was happy Thank you, and God bless you too.

Sey,
Thanks for stopping in always love knowing people's favorite lines...

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

GG
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since 2002-12-03
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Lost in thought
9 posted 2003-11-22 08:19 PM


Terri,
As long as I am on earth, I'm not too sure that I will know much more then that hurt...but its worth it, I suppose, to do what He wants of me. Thanks for your kind reply.

Kelly,
In time things will change.. things always shift at least, whether they get better or not, well, its relative glad you liked it, thanks for the reply!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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