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Suetang
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0 posted 2003-11-20 08:33 PM




Toes sink deep into the sand
As our fingers interlace
I stand here facing you
My eyes drawn towards your face

I lift my index finger
As I trace around your lips
Your hands move to my shoulders
Before they settle on my hips

You pull my body closer
As your lips envelop mine
The sun glistens on the water
As the seagulls come to dine

You take me by the hand
As the sun starts sinking low
Your love fills my inner being
Through my veins I feel it flow

Soon the sun will be replaced
With a glowing white sphere
As you whisper those three words
That you know I love to hear

Beneath the pale moonlight
Love comes into fruition
As I surrender to your heart
And lose all my inhibitions

* * *

"....you have bereft me of words,
only my blood speaks to you
through my veins"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-11-20 09:08 PM


Suetang,
Lovely picture and a lovelier poem.

Sadelite
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2 posted 2003-11-20 09:11 PM


I couldn't agree more with Seymour.
                        Sadelite

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3 posted 2003-11-20 09:36 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this as all your beautiful poetry reflects paradise of true love, sweet friend, this is a wonderful declaration of love, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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4 posted 2003-11-21 10:19 PM


Sue:  You do write wonderful romantic poems!

Betty Lou Hebert

Robert Frazier
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5 posted 2003-11-21 11:48 PM


sue, beautiful!
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-11-22 02:38 PM


you are the queen of romance
vandana
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7 posted 2003-11-22 04:55 PM


enjoyed
NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
8 posted 2003-11-22 05:34 PM


Hi Sue ... I thought of you today as I was out in my gardens cleaning up and cutting down dead plants. I know yours is coming to life while mine goes for a long winter's nap.

This poem is so beautiful and filled with such tender love. How much I wish to be walking on this beach!

Love to you, Marti

“Prayer makes the heart large enough until it can contain God’s gift of Himself.”
Blessed Mother Teresa

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