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eulalie
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since 2003-11-16
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0 posted 2003-11-20 08:16 PM


If anyone can think of a good name for this poem I would apprecitate it.


Naked at 4 a.m. writhing poems
To empty my thoughts
Until my penmanship grows lax.
I go to bed,
but my pen quit
long before my head.  

There is a whisper across
my face from hair you misplaced.  The stench of your
sex brings me to my feet, and I pray that God will
bring me Lilith and wet dreams-

I cry out like Adam must have done when she left
Him in the garden to be half of one
One of half
of one
of none

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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-11-20 09:13 PM


eulalie,
How about wet dream LOL clever, enjoyed the read.

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
2 posted 2003-11-21 10:35 PM


keep up the penmanship under any situation...welcome to Passions


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