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Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2003-11-19 08:51 PM



Picture by Josephine Wall

* * *

I've searched in all directions
Across the land and out to sea
In the hope that my true love
Might come sailing towards me

Immersed in cool clear water
I dive into the deepest blue
In a sea of sensuality
I have come looking for you

The water shines like diamonds
Beneath the warm sunshine
As the warm wind sends a message
From your precious heart to mine

I need your love to quench me
And satisfy my deep desire
To feel your love flow through me
And contain this raging fire

Soon I hear a voice behind me
It is my name that I am hearing
And now I come to realise
That I have dreamed you into being

* * *

"If I never met him,
I would have dreamed him into being"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Dee
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Queensland, Australia
1 posted 2003-11-19 09:01 PM


Sue, this is a beautiful peice. Very touching.

Dee

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-11-19 09:36 PM


Nice. Very romantic. It's as if I can hear sea whispers.
Terri~

ice
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3 posted 2003-11-19 10:36 PM


Beautiful painting--Lovely poem--enjoyed reading it

________ice
  ><>

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2003-11-19 10:40 PM


Suetang,
This is excellent, I have done the same thing. LOL

allamericanjoe
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5 posted 2003-11-19 10:46 PM


Sue,
very nicely penned!  A very romantic write, just the way I like em'!!   Keep em coming sweetie.

hugs from me to you
JD

"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time"  ~James taylor~

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-11-20 03:38 AM


*sigh* I don't know how you keep doing it over and over and over...you are a hopeless romantic....we all need those
Goldenrose
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7 posted 2003-11-20 05:24 AM


This is brilliant..you are one of the finest romantic writers on pip..and the pictures that you put with them are always fantastic...people are inspired to write their own love poetry when they see this kind of work..and if that is what happens then you have touched somebody in a unique way...thanks again Sue..for your words....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

EvocativeVerse2
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8 posted 2003-11-20 09:06 AM


Mmm I love this Sue...wonderfully done!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

icebox
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in the shadows
9 posted 2003-11-20 09:33 AM


Such romance!  I can only sense this through poetry (I have no real frame of reference).

Thanks.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
10 posted 2003-11-20 06:09 PM


Lovely...reminds me of a song by Savage Garden...they say something along the lines of.."I think I dreamed you into my life"...a song introduced to me by my lady of the North Country...James
Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
11 posted 2003-11-20 07:50 PM


Thank you all so much for your wonderful comments.

Goldenrose - I was going to email you but I did not have your email address so I hope you get to read how humbled I was by your comment.  I was so very moved by what you wrote and I thank you from the bottom of my heart.

James - I know the song you speak of, it is called "I Knew I Loved You".  Savage Garden are an Australian duo although they have now broken up.  Darren Hayes, the more prominent in the group is a wonderful songwriter and I love their music.  I'm glad they are enjoyed on the other side of the world too.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins


[This message has been edited by Suetang (11-20-2003 07:56 PM).]

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12 posted 2003-11-20 11:26 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww this too reminded me of Savage Garden's song, dearest friend, though I am not big on boy bands overall, Savage Garden was the best one and I really enjoyed their beautiful music when they were together! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, and I am so happy your search is complete as your deserving heart always sings with love, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Felinus
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since 2003-08-06
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Princeton
13 posted 2003-11-21 12:11 PM


I love ocean references in poetry.  Your rhyme sense is wonderful.   I really enjoy your poems.
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
14 posted 2003-11-22 08:56 PM


Sue?

That I have dreamed you into being


really, I think I have . . .
*smile*
just what I needed tonight
thank you
xxoo

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