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wintertao
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since 2003-11-17
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Okaloosa Island, FL

0 posted 2003-11-19 04:48 PM



Spanish girls greet the world
rolling thru red lips -
Bouncing down the street,
dancing with their hips.
Spanish Girls have passion,
and wild raven hair.
Eyes that fire bottlerockets
off into the air.
Spanish Girls know love...
they find it everyday,
Walking thru the mountains,
the Andes bow and sway.

SMC

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-11-19 10:36 PM


This is a beautiful piece. Wonderfully written

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-11-20 03:42 AM


they are one of a kind, aren't they?
dingusjr
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since 2003-09-24
Posts 415
Missouri
3 posted 2003-11-20 04:09 AM


Don't know that many Spanish girls......but your poem is really good.  I can see
them "red lipped and rolling those hips"   Thanks!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2003-11-20 05:52 PM


Sensual...James
Felinus
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since 2003-08-06
Posts 20
Princeton
5 posted 2003-11-21 12:30 PM


I am a Spanish girl and I take your poem as a compliment.   Unfortunately I don;t live in the Andes anymore but in a stuffy uptight town where my wild raven hair is disapproved of.   You made me feel good
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