the backdrop of the world
is warmer than
palm of our hands
these lines set well the form, by creating an image that draws the reader in, the following lines, then the ending, all deliver the punch, the part that takes your breath for a second, in understanding and in empathy...
you dear do truly impress me... you write well beyond your years in understanding and have the talent to deliver the words in such a way they become a part of the reader...
I'll be proud to say one day... "I read her before..I read her when.."