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duncan idaho
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dune


0 posted 11-19-2003 02:39 PM       View Profile for duncan idaho   Email duncan idaho   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for duncan idaho

a path

I am the middle of the
middle
Class.
Content
Casual
Complete
With my starbucks bitch
and a mind full of
[Edited by Moderator] .
I soak compasionate
conservative
Nonsense, and
live the dream.
yes, the dream.
forced into my
being by blind bigot banter.
I took the path more traveled by,
and it has eaten my introspective soul.

[This message has been edited by Enchantress (11-19-2003 03:13 PM).]

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ice
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1 posted 11-20-2003 07:37 AM       View Profile for ice   Email ice   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ice

I don't see another comment here yet? and I don't know why?
This poem is modern and upbeat, reminds me of Bukowski or Ken Patchen in the mid twentieth century....keep writting in your style, it worked very well for them...

Anyway, I enjoyed this poem, hope to see more from you...

______ice
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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 11-20-2003 07:43 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

duncan idaho
Well done, enjoyed the read.
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 11-20-2003 08:15 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

I took the path more traveled by,
and it has eaten my introspective soul.

All to often the path more traveled is the one taken and in the end unhappiness prevails.  Very well written.
passing shadows
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4 posted 11-20-2003 01:57 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I never could aquire the taste for Starbucks but it's a good place to be when waiting on a flight at Dulles International

this poem rocks!

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5 posted 11-20-2003 02:57 PM       View Profile for wranx   Email wranx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wranx

Duncan m'friend?
I knew someone with a simiar malady (mal lady?) He found himself in a shack, perched on a small river.

I'd like to think that he's the better for it.
muchos
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6 posted 12-27-2003 01:15 PM       View Profile for muchos   Email muchos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muchos

call me stupid and shoot me dead for this was something i do not dread keep it and and make me smile i love your poems, its all worth while
 
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