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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-11-19 02:20 PM



Seems that he has the
Touch, or so I’ve been told, as
Orally he
Recites
Yesterday’s odes, then
Tomorrow he’ll
Elaborate, yet again,
Line by
Line,
Evoking memories by
Recitation…

Extrapolate he will, from apples to
Xylophones,
Tales of passing travelers on long night
Roads, taking us
Across the nation, then of
Oracles or operettas that caught his attention, to
Rats and Sailors and Toes that glow, and
Did you know?
It is his forte, they say
Not that others can’t do it, to
Accentuate the positive, his metered style proves it,
I
Reiterate, a storyteller,
Extraordinaire!

© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-11-19 02:23 PM


nicely offered Sunshine... Deer fits this bill quite well and you do well with a tribute.....


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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-11-19 02:25 PM


Oh gee Karilea...
I think I have this one pegged...
But I'll sit on my hands for a bit.
Let others have a chance..
This is wonderful!!
What fun we're having today!
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-11-19 02:26 PM


Oh dang...the Captain answered while I was typing...LOL.
Yup...it's our Balladeer..right?

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4 posted 2003-11-19 02:27 PM


kudos lady, very well done!
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just out of reach
5 posted 2003-11-19 03:00 PM



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6 posted 2003-11-19 03:38 PM


Excellent, Karilea!!  
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7 posted 2003-11-19 04:11 PM


Kari? this is a lovely tribute
and My God how did you make this
flow so nicely?
*amazed here*
well met
xxoo

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8 posted 2003-11-19 04:15 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, I know Balladeer will be deeply touched by this as he truly has a whole collection of stories to tell each with their own special essence! (big hugggsssssss) I love this, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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9 posted 2003-11-20 12:37 PM


To have such words of praise bestowed on me
Has this old face aglow with ecstacy.
A kind word from a peer can mean so much
Needs can be fulfilled by such a touch.
Karilea, my thanks go out to you
Your words shine in everything you do.
Once again you've brought a smile to me..
Up with poetry and P.I.P!!!

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10 posted 2003-11-20 03:24 AM


awesome write! challenge well met!
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