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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2003-11-19 12:52 PM


Shades of grayish blue pass by
       steadily, without pause,
mixing glimpses of white
in natures adorn.

The air is crisp with the scent
of the oncoming storm.
Mountains rise majestically
against hues of shadowed skies.

          ~ a breeze stirs~

Softly comes the pi t t er   pa t t er
a lullaby of serene
    gently coaxing me;

breathe deeper, listen closer
take a moment to hear the spirits
feel the inner flame, see the wonder
and revel in the touch of Mother Earth.

Take a taste from the wellsprings of life
be as one with the earth and sky,
know that there are answers to the questions of why...

~allow the peace to enter in..
and let the spirit soar again....~


It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-19-2003 01:41 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-11-19 01:01 PM


"~allow the peace to enter in..
and let the spirit soar again....~"

Ah sweetie..this is so beautiful!
You know...you could use the above lines as your sig line!
Love ya,
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2003-11-19 01:04 PM


yep Nancy it is close to the one that I used to use "on the wings of words our spirits fly and our souls are free"
something like that anyhow...lol....
Thanks hon, appreciate the read.

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-19-2003 03:32 PM).]

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-11-19 01:07 PM


*throwing balled fists up into air*

YES!

this...is inspiring!

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2003-11-19 01:09 PM


Dixie, just call it a getting in touch with life sort of thing over lunch today..lol.
Thanks, glad you found something good in this.  Hugs.

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5 posted 2003-11-19 01:37 PM



Sounds
like you've been listening to
just what
was needed...


Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2003-11-19 01:40 PM


its amazing what comes to us on the breeze sometimes Kari...
thank ya!!

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7 posted 2003-11-19 02:16 PM


very nicely done...and a pleasure to read.


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8 posted 2003-11-19 05:55 PM


GentleSpirit~
You knew I'd find it ... and it touches me~

'know that there are answers to the questions of why...

~allow the peace to enter in..
and let the spirit soar again....~'


Seeking answers here ...~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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9 posted 2003-11-19 06:49 PM





you are inspiring....
Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
10 posted 2003-11-19 07:07 PM


These words really spoke to me. Thank you for sharing them.
Love,
Terri~

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11 posted 2003-11-20 06:19 AM


''Allow the peace to enter in and let the soul soar again''...very nice writing..beautifuly descriptive...thank you for the words..

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

LeeJ
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12 posted 2003-11-20 08:41 AM


oh how nature so tesitifies the great hues of life...as you have so brilliantly painted here for us.  Lovely
JamesMichael
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13 posted 2003-11-20 05:57 PM


Very nice...James
Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2003-11-20 06:27 PM


You are all so very kind and I thank you for the wonderful words you have left for me to cherish.  Hugs and peace!
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