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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-11-19 11:10 AM


Cornucopias mixing souls
Flowing from minds…
Golden mornings...fiery arrows
Family films, classic drama..creation prime
Enhancing natural beauty, transcending eternal life
Raiment sweeps imagery, one sip cups my heart
Threads running eagerly through aesthetic visions
Reveres inside, oh gracious haunting, smooth…whispy
Accomplished writers of faith, muscular, solar rendezvous
Mythologies we trust, picking granites from the years
Swelling place of love, bound for the sea somewhere
Holding stars to the uncertainty of music
Coincides our rhythmic dance, tangled in candles
Your fingers grace dreams, awaken voices
Enticing sweet like-mindedness, what wondrous leaps
Towards even tides in glistened reflections, strolling mansions deep!
Hearing your voice, unity of psyche, bright mirrors blush and smile
End to end; cadence fills this sense of place for miles
Harmony of emotions, remembrance of deep
Wordless resonance emerges hypnotic~
Soft gentle beats, taking direction, simultaneous
Alterations of bends we find…awareness gathering meanings
Sounds never heard before, upturning pitch, spoken from your hungry lips
Blending fine art, oil lamps, handcrafted and odorless
You are the eyes imagining the charisma of a lover
Where moonbeam flowers sweet emotions never touching ground
You are the meaning of me, the yellow light through my window
The whispering promise in the clouds
From the day’s yawn…the flush of colors stressing consciousness
Progression, new unknowns
We receive lighthearted paths; air freshens with your scent
Towards calming waters precious, in languid pools we’re spent
Faithful beauty springs from summer oceans placing faces limitless
You are time in every generation, beyond hearing, patterns weaving
Without you, my love, what meaning would I have?
Where we live within great mystery, venturing timelessness
For no more harsh winters shall overwhelm your heart


Written for someone I have not yet met, but I know he's out there somewhere

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1 posted 2003-11-19 12:26 PM


You are the meaning of me, the yellow light through my window
The whispering promise in the clouds

I like this very much, Lee... *S*

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-11-19 12:36 PM


well at least you have hope...knowing he's out there...a good write, loved the last lines
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3 posted 2003-11-19 12:38 PM


I am always overwhelmed when reading you... flooded with images and thoughts you write as if you simply opened up all the gates and let flood EVERYTHING...

always an experience....


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