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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2003-11-19 04:54 AM


Like the brightest star you were to me.
So much did i want to see you, set our hearts free.

Hold you in my arms, kiss your beautiful face.
Feel your touch on my skin,
closer to each other in tender embrace.

See your world and how you live.
More than all the jewels in the world,for this i would give.

Elegant you would look as we eat a beautifuly prepared meal.
Hot burning love for you i would feel.

Sat on a couch, cozy and warm, watching a film holding hands.
Our love so vast,like the shifting desert sands.

But alas things changed and it was not to be.
Go in good faith and always fly free, knowing you will always be loved by one.......me.

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2003-11-19 04:58 AM


oh no...please don't say

GR, this is heart-breaking news, if true to fact, and for who I think it's for...


garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-11-19 06:04 AM


Ohhhh, Golden, this hurts. I know that I don't reply much, but it's only because I don't know what to say. I do read, though. If this means what it sounds like, I truly hope that things will work out between you two. I hate to see someone hurt, and I can feel pain here.

Hugs  
Ethel

Brad Majors
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3 posted 2003-11-19 07:57 AM


sad but very pretty
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2003-11-19 09:07 AM


GoldenRose~

'knowing you will always be loved by one.......me.'

This touches me ... as I've heard (and said) those very words~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
       noles1@totcon.com   

VAS
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since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
5 posted 2003-11-19 09:11 AM


soft, tender, your heart is showing

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
6 posted 2003-11-19 04:14 PM


Goldenrose

I could feel so much sadness and sorrow in your words.  I am so sorry that love has deserted you but always know that it will return even though you cannot see it right now.

"In dreams and in love
there are no impossibilities"

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
7 posted 2003-11-19 05:29 PM


Oh, Dear Rose of Gold, let not thy blossom fade with the dimming of love's light. The sun shall rise again, to shine down upon thy sweet essence.


EA

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-19-2003 11:46 PM).]

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
8 posted 2003-11-20 08:15 PM


Hello Goldenrose

I was unable to contact you by email as I wanted to thank you for the beautiful comment you left on my poem "In Search Of My True Love".  I left a note for you but I thought you might not get to see it so I thought I'd do it this way.  I was so very moved by your words which humbled me greatly.

I felt so much sadness when I read this poem of yours and I hope time will heal your broken heart.

Here is a little something for you.

"Love alone is capable
of uniting human beings
in such a way as to
complete and fulfil them,
for it alone takes them
and joins them by what
is deepest in themselves"

and this......
(from one hopeless romantic to another!)

"......you have bereft me of words,
Only my blood speaks to you
through my veins"

Thanks again for your kindness and I wish you much love and happiness.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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