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littlewing
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0 posted 2003-11-18 10:25 PM





Violent gusts of laughter melding
Love, inherent.  This soul
Radiates sincerity.  An artists touch
Amends broken ties for
You and I, you see;
Nightfall embraces her keen
Eye - sight reflecting
Soft glow of beauty.


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Please see Brad's Challenge:
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© Copyright 2003 Sue Eckam - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-11-18 10:31 PM


Absolutely beautiful!
I know someone who is going to love this!
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2003-11-18 10:37 PM


nightfall embraces her keen eye.....
liked this much
and you write of her as she comes through in  her poetry, well done

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3 posted 2003-11-18 10:37 PM


You met this challenge with the PERFECT answer!


vlraynes
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4 posted 2003-11-18 10:49 PM



Sue?...now look what you've done...
you went and made me cry... smile

I know, I know...but hey...it wouldn't
be the first time I was accused of
being a 'softie'...right, K?...grin

You are way too good to me, Sue.
Thank you for this, and just for knowing.

Love you so much, my sis...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Brad Majors
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5 posted 2003-11-18 11:17 PM


so well done. Can you find the two I did?
littlewing
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6 posted 2003-11-19 03:11 AM


you sneaky thing Brad, now I will go swimming . . .
Nan
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7 posted 2003-11-19 06:37 AM


Hmmmm.... Anyone ever wonder what the "L" stands for???... This is a very nice tribute to a fine lady, Sue...
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8 posted 2003-11-19 08:45 AM


lovely, lovely, lovely Sue.....:0)

with a smile..

Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

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9 posted 2003-11-19 08:52 AM


Sue, this is very good...
and about a precious lady.  
Hugs to you both.  
Ethel

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10 posted 2003-11-19 10:00 AM


Big smile fopr this one littlewing.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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11 posted 2003-11-19 10:14 AM


clever ma'am... and your talent is showing..lol


nicely done..

vandana
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12 posted 2003-11-19 10:25 AM


enjoyed
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13 posted 2003-11-19 11:58 AM


Beautiful!

Eric

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14 posted 2003-11-19 12:51 PM


gorgeous!
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15 posted 2003-11-19 01:47 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, Vicky is going to cherish this forever as I can tell this deeply touched her heart as the tears of joy shows sincerely! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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16 posted 2003-11-19 01:48 PM


absolutely lovely Sue! Well done!
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17 posted 2003-11-19 03:13 PM


Wow...this is really cool.
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18 posted 2003-11-19 04:19 PM


It looks like you are meeting challenges at every turn; very goodly done, littlewing.

[This message has been edited by Essorant (11-19-2003 04:19 PM).]

littlewing
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19 posted 2003-11-19 04:33 PM


Thank you so much Nancy
I hope so

Michele? that was very sweet
thank you

awwww K coming from you that means more than you wil ever know
thank you

Thereeeeeeeee she isssssss . . .
Missssss Aamerrrrricaaaaaaaaaa
*smile*
I knew you would cry
but good tears . . .
I am so happy you like this
(that V was tough Vic)
and you deserve so much more
you give to us all
thank YOU for the inspiration
hugs sis

Brad, thank you and yes I have you smart lil devil you

Hey Nan I am guessing Lynn
Vicky Lynn . . . or Lee
yes Vicky Lee thank you

Thank you Lauren, you are so sweet

Thanks Ethel , yes precious undeed
hugs back atchya
LittleOne

Thank you Kevin *still smiling from
the last one

OK now coming from you Ron that
means the world to me
thank you truly

Thank you V!

Thanks Eric

aww shucks Dix

Noah I sure hope so thank you

Hey Donna thank you so much

Meg?  thank you so much

Hey Essorant .  . thank you so much
I love the chsllenges stretches the
mind a bit

Vicky?  Long may you runnn . . .
Oh I have to send you that tune . . .

Thank you Brad for this challenge
very cool
and thank you Miss Vicky
for the write

Thanks guys
xxoo

  



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20 posted 2003-11-19 05:41 PM


Beautiful Sue.

Vicky is indeed such a special lady.

Challenge well met.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


littlewing
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21 posted 2003-11-20 09:48 AM


Thank you Maree

vlraynes
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22 posted 2003-11-21 02:55 AM



Just needed to read this again tonight.
You know why...smile

Thank you, again, Sue...
Love you much, my sis...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

ambrish
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23 posted 2003-11-21 03:22 AM


Eye - sight reflecting
Soft glow of beauty.

               lovely

eor
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24 posted 2003-11-21 01:09 PM


Sue- i really liked this, you did a very beautiful write here...

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

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