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Open Poetry #29

And Still

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-11-18 02:37 PM

And Still

my heart knows
unknown limits
for it
has flown
wings of
flighted sky
lost and found
at times
it has had
feet drug
heeled in dirt
and still
it has
to dance
I do not
question why

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-11-18 03:09 PM

nice

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2003-11-18 03:24 PM

I love your turn of the phrase

"for it
has flown
wings of
flighted sky"

Such an elegant phrase.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2003-11-18 03:37 PM

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-11-18 03:39 PM

"and still
it has
to dance
I do not
question why"

Exquisite!!
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

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