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wintertao
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Okaloosa Island, FL

0 posted 2003-11-18 01:58 PM


Met for coffee on Saturday afternoon
after chatting under light of the moon
Bow and Arrow before she leaves
missed and now I deal with thieves
who steal my heart
in the darkest dark
The Coffee Gods just laugh at me
back again my friend I see
Have another cup sit by the fire
Dream of Colombian desire
The Andes mountains all around
The Coffee Gods make a lovely sound
~
And...
I have a spoken word mp3 of this set to original
light music that came out really nice...if you
would like a copy just e-mail me and I'll send
it to you its a small mp3 about 1 minute long or
if you prefer you can hear it at my homepage...
thanks

SMC

[This message has been edited by wintertao (11-18-2003 02:01 PM).]

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steavenr
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1 posted 2003-11-18 02:03 PM


Really like your style.  btw, checked out your website.  Glad to see you posted this one here.
icebox
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in the shadows
2 posted 2003-11-18 02:13 PM


Thank you for celbrating one of my favorite drugs!


scorpio
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3 posted 2003-11-18 02:18 PM


Well done.  I enjoyed the presentation.

believe in what your heart feels...

wintertao
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4 posted 2003-11-18 04:28 PM


thanks for checking it out I really appreciate it...
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5 posted 2003-11-19 12:13 PM


You have a unique approach to poetry -- cerebral but wacky, visual but sensual. Very good stuff, that deserves to go to the top again.

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6 posted 2003-11-19 11:28 AM


On a day when I'm paying frequent homage to the coffee gods, the title was irresistable. *G* And I'm glad... I enjoyed this! *S*
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