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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-11-18 11:47 AM


A heart charged with text
Takes on its own spirit
A heart unruffled by simple troubles
Showers deep peace, riding a white horse
Welcoming a specific rider…you
Among various calligraphers
Entire motivation admires original
The perfect heart even showers
Flying wings of desires
Fluttering beyond imaginings
A masonry bonding drama
Noble voices, gentle forms of karma
Obvious by the one it loves
For the joy of others reads itself
They are minerals in your core
Warming on the threshold of your world
Gleaning heavily from your inheritance
Within the great banquet of your mind
Should I spend the dollars that you give me?
Looking out the window, with you
Is the real season of nature’s imperfect consistently?
Only time worth all that seems effortless
Responding to new information, new priorities fields flowering
It’s no longer important to be right~
Filling up a space with liquid memory
Mixing a creative dial…with new imaginings
Unfolding events, acknowledgement of the past
Optimistic hands write positive aspects
Of a humanly designed music
Deliberately painting improvement
You gave me rewards, beyond any level of daylight
And a real reason for considerations
You are a test of courage, the fruits of morning
Just look at how far we’ve come and still unfolding
We are not coincidence but God’s opinion
A reflection of what we should value
Believing we can go on
We are faith contagious, passions of today
And the only thing we own
Empowering happiness, building wisdom to know
We are one seed crowned in glory with hope
Never to be chocked by the weeds of self delusion
But more so, reaching for a worthy evolution
Beyond the next crest
More alive and pounding in our chests
Not afraid to drop…for he’ll catch me
Upon quiescent rays of laughter

Together we’ll float upon the wind
Our success is mingling ~ forever
Even in absence of each other
We are crayons painting tomorrow
In you, my journey has been complimented


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1 posted 2003-11-18 12:01 PM


well done
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2 posted 2003-11-18 12:56 PM


indeed, we are crayons
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3 posted 2003-11-18 12:58 PM


Very good writing, Lee.
I enjoyed your "painting".
Hugs  
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-11-18 01:57 PM


"Together we’ll float upon the wind
Our success is mingling ~ forever
Even in absence of each other
We are crayons painting tomorrow
In you, my journey has been complimented"

~ Lee I love the way you think ~ and write!

Love, Light, & to painting the heart, skies, and tomorrows!


Linda

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