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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-11-18 09:32 AM



Damn them all...
that's how she feels
but can't express those words
in real, because she is the one,
the only one who cares
yet is never noticed for the good in her.

What is the use
in being that way,
in the end what will it bring?

Even self-satisfaction
doesn't take away the sting
and the guilt of saying
"Damn them all."


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-18-2003 09:33 AM).]

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wintertao
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1 posted 2003-11-18 09:48 AM


I enjoyed this alot...read it 3 times.
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-11-18 10:08 AM


thanks for reading this morning...a little  self pitying this morning
M

Hockeychick19
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3 posted 2003-11-18 10:48 AM


I like this one a lot too.

~Kelly~

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4 posted 2003-11-18 09:58 PM


Maureen, I can really understand what you are trying to say here....been there and there are few feelings more frustrating. Yes, you can have the self-satisfaction of knowing you're right but somehow that just doesn't seem to be enough to dispel the feelings, does it? So who said life was fair?
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just out of reach
5 posted 2003-11-18 10:08 PM


I hear ya honey...I hear ya. hugs, Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

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6 posted 2003-11-18 11:01 PM


like beating your head against the wall, and just ending up with a bad headache, unfortunately
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