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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-11-18 08:40 AM


Dare I beseech thee?
grace my virgin soul
with poetic melody
honey sweet
crafted by heaven's angelic host

Dare I walk a path where feet
where feet never trod?
Onward toward uncertain futures
waiting to be born
hopes of the heights of love unattained
lore of passion's caress

Dare I proclaim from mountain's peak
guarded secrets
for fear my heart can scarcely utter?
To say the words
"I love you"
seems but a simple thing
but all but impossible behind locked lips
for which there is no key.

A million miles I would wander
in search of love
But alas this poor fool
does sit pondering
whether or not to open heart's door.

© Copyright 2003 Dan Mauro - All Rights Reserved
Jes
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1 posted 2003-11-18 08:51 AM


Smile just say the words to the one

Smile

Jes


Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-11-18 09:04 AM


thank you
Kahlil
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3 posted 2003-11-18 09:08 AM


Oh yes, all those powerful doubts and fears before that first time we dare to reveal "I Love You".  Nicely written.  ~K~
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4 posted 2003-11-18 09:24 AM


"A million miles I would wander
in search of love
But alas this poor fool
does sit pondering
whether or not to open heart's door."

Beautifully said Brad..
I say open the door.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Brad Majors
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thank you
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6 posted 2003-11-18 10:09 AM


Another wonderful read.


Brad Majors
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7 posted 2003-11-18 10:22 AM


why thank you
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8 posted 2003-11-18 10:40 AM


I like this. I myself feel I can relate to your words because I have trouble saying those three beautiful words too. I believe the day will come for you and a special someone to express your love to each other and it will be more beautiful than you ever imagined.

Nice work
~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

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