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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-11-18 07:19 AM


Of Styles

I turned the treadmill of a style
Rotations of a frown and smile
But could not seem to sit the fence
Or wave my scepter in defense.

The balance was of equal weight
Of course depending on the state
Where one could dip the scale to tip
By passing words with tongue and lip

From holocaust to feathered peace
The purchase could a lifetime lease
And I for one could not abide
No matter how I turned or tried

Do I wish upon a star?
And wonder ever where you are
Or can I wash the tar of life
And oxi clean the red of strife

I feel within a turnstiles bend
Where the end, is not the end.



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scorpio
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1 posted 2003-11-18 07:48 AM


Well done Sy.  

believe in what your heart feels...

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-11-18 08:37 AM


well done
Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-11-18 08:39 AM



Round and round and round we go...
I think I got caught in the turnstyle, Sy!

Help!  Help!!!

(and good morning!   )


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4 posted 2003-11-18 09:00 AM


Morning Sy!
Is your head spinning caught in that turnstyle?
Loved this mornings offering.
Tell me the truth now...
does Randy help you with these wonderful words?
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

EvocativeVerse2
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5 posted 2003-11-18 09:01 AM


Hi Seymour...now this was the perfect way for my day to begin. Thank-you very much. I enjoyed this a lot.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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6 posted 2003-11-18 10:28 AM


From holocaust to feathered peace
The purchase could a lifetime lease


Wonderful words yet again Seymour. Thankyou.
Hot biscuits and honey to-day!! hugs, Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

Jes
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7 posted 2003-11-18 11:09 AM


Hi Seymor

" I feel within a turnstiles bend
Where the end, is not the end. "

hehehe this is abit saying yes and know but i liketaht cause its then up to people, what they want to think. And arent we all like that sometimes.

A smile for your day

Jes



Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2003-11-18 11:33 AM


scorpio
A welcome reply, thank you.

Brad,
Thank you.

Sunshine
Good morning love.

Nancy,
Yep, be right over for tea.

EvocativeVerse2
Glag you enjoyed and thank you.

Chris,
Hot biscuits and honey, yummy,

Jes,
Yes they are, thank you Jes.

Susan Caldwell
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9 posted 2003-11-18 12:51 PM


"Where the end, is not the end"

Isn't that the truth??

Afternoon Sy!! (I missed "breakfast with Sy")

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2003-11-18 01:34 PM


Susan,
We'll make up for it with lunch.

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2003-11-18 02:03 PM


"Do I wish upon a star?
And wonder ever where you are
Or can I wash the tar of life
And oxi clean the red of strife"

~ Oh, yes. Do wish upon a star. Magic happens! ~ in divine time! lol

I loved your rye, I mean "wry", wit in those last 2 lines!

Loves 'n hugs 'n whoop--dee--doos!
'round & 'round we go!

EA

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12 posted 2003-11-18 02:38 PM


LOL Seymour  
Earth Angel got me dizzy there. LOL

Good Afternoon, my friend. I missed
breakfast, too.
Have a good afernoon, though.  
Hugs  
Ethel

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2003-11-18 02:39 PM


Earth Angel
You are an infinite source of pleasure. LOL


Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2003-11-18 02:40 PM


Ethel,
Hugs back love.

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