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0 posted 2003-11-17 07:23 PM




“Where is the wind?”

“It is in this box.”

“Where is the wind?”

“It is here, in this tiny box."

"See, I’ve let it out!”


© Copyright 2003 Ed Ratledge - All Rights Reserved
wintertao
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1 posted 2003-11-17 07:30 PM


I likes it, very nizzzeee !
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2 posted 2003-11-17 08:46 PM


Nooooo...I'm still in the asylum silly

What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall?
All walls are great, if the roof doesn't fall.
-yorke/bjork

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3 posted 2003-11-17 08:52 PM


LOL, I knew our WIND would show up for this one.
BTW, it was knock-you-down-windy in Colorado today.  

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4 posted 2003-11-17 11:13 PM


LOL take it back....the outside wind that is.... we have had far too much lately....

hugssss
Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

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5 posted 2003-11-18 11:40 AM


And just what else do you have in there? *G*

I like this very much, my friend... not since Pandora peeked has so much been packed into such a tiny space. *S*

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6 posted 2003-11-18 12:20 PM


Yes..I love it!
And, please leave it out of the box...
that way the leaves will dance on down the road.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

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7 posted 2003-11-18 12:59 PM



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8 posted 2003-11-18 01:02 PM


LOL Ed......you sure are a mess.
I never know what I'm going to see
"in the box" when I ope your posts.
You always make us think, and that's very good!!
Hugs  
Ethel

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9 posted 2003-11-18 02:27 PM


Is it breezy in here??  This made me smile.

believe in what your heart feels...

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10 posted 2003-11-18 03:25 PM



Here, there, everywhere...
hang onto your hat...

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11 posted 2003-11-18 05:25 PM


Oh..........! Your the one who left the wind out.Cause that ole wind is once again blowing my raked leaves all over the yard.
Did you tell it to rain also?
See Ya
Love Bon-Bon

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12 posted 2003-11-18 06:00 PM


so this is what has been rattling my windows . . .
*smile*
xxoo

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13 posted 2003-11-18 06:01 PM


Wow, this left me winded

sg

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