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James_A_Fraser
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Fortune


Your smile arrived first,
waited poised all through dinner,
a soft red fortune cookie
that promised good things
whether opened first or last.

You taste like good luck.

© Copyright 2003 James A. Fraser - All Rights Reserved
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WoWsA! I love this !
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Deliciously sweet!


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Any time I read a poem and find myself smiling, it becomes a favorite. *S*

I like this very much, Jamie... *S*
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James...loved the feel of this one. One piece of advice...get this one out to a few publishers!!!! Great write
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oooooh, do I love this one? Yes, I am keeping it! Library bound it is. Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

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Dont ya just love it when the cookie is right....wonderful...words...
Lauren~


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I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

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Jamie.....I'm not sure how I missed this....I love fortune cookies!  
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