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ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01
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0 posted 2003-11-17 12:11 PM


****Amy, if you read this.....you were right about Dino.****

It's over, this game between you and me
I've never felt such relief
I cried but not because of grief, tears of sheer happiness rolled down my face
You say you are going to bring me down
I'd like to see you try
The question I ask myself is why, I did nothing to you but you are a *itch
I hope you burn in hell one day for what you did to me
I know that's a bad thing to wish one someone but i'm just glad....its over.

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GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
1 posted 2003-11-17 03:03 AM


wow, keep writin, get it out...
sounds like its a good thing to have it over.
You go girl...

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Jes
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since 2003-10-21
Posts 422
Denmark
2 posted 2003-11-17 04:44 AM


huhhhh im happy im not the one you are speaking of.

And you are right its not good to wish others this but, sometimes its just needed to get out.

So go ahead and scream it out.

Smile

Jes


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2003-11-17 04:48 AM


I know what you mean...just glad to have it over with...I've been there before
ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01
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4 posted 2003-11-18 07:23 PM


I do not have the time to personally thank each one of you.  However, I would like to thank you for your support during this time.  Its been a very rocky relationship for me.  I wish that I would have listened to everyone who told me to get out while I could but I gave her the benefit of the doubt.  I wanted to prove that she wasn't a bad person.....although in the back of my mind i knew the truth.  

Thanks,
~Laura~

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
5 posted 2003-11-25 09:28 AM


laura,

i'm glad to see you've gotten out of
this. it was hard for me to just watch
you get hurt, that's why i had to "go
away". well one of the reasons. i have
my own things to contend with as well.
hope you are well
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

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