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beckers716
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since 2003-11-16
Posts 39
Ohio

0 posted 2003-11-16 11:26 PM



One,
Two,
Three,
Four,
Five must be somewhere
Cause this is Six
Lost in the pack
Somewhere along the way
Memory is faded
Lost to the night
Again I count the seconds
From day to day
Lost again
Somewhere along the way
The path
Unclear to the naked eye
But I see
As I run
Towards you
Or away from me

Only when all hope seems lost, can you hope to find yourself

© Copyright 2003 Becky - All Rights Reserved
Tim
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since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794

1 posted 2003-11-17 12:09 PM


I do not recall reading any of your poems previously.  Interesting and enjoyable read.

[This message has been edited by Tim (11-17-2003 12:27 AM).]

beckers716
Junior Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 39
Ohio
2 posted 2003-11-17 07:53 AM


thank you
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