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Open Poetry #29

Yesterday

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

0 posted 2003-11-16 06:40 PM

Sitting on the beach waiting
for the sun to rise,
the thoughts of you entered
my mind with a smile.

Remembering the laughter,fun
we two shared.

As the sun begins to rise so
do the tears in my eyes.

Upon rising I slowly put the
memories of time together away
for another day.

Walking away and wishing it was...
still yesterday.

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

1 posted 2003-11-17 10:20 AM

Hi mean and green. Mmm now how did this one get so far away down the page before I noticed it? LOL! Love it froggy. Well done.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-11-17 10:31 AM

"Walking away and wishing it was...
still yesterday."

~ I believe that I do understand. I have been there and I know how that feels. I, like yourself, treasure the gifts of the good memories and enjoy them every now and then. With the passing of time, the ache inside lessens as new life experiences eventually become warm memories...

Warm, healing hugs,
EA

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2003-11-17 10:35 AM

Full of melancholy, but a soft beautiful write.
Love, Margherita

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

4 posted 2003-11-17 03:44 PM

Thank-you EvocativeVerse ( Shakespeare)
I'm glad you liked this one. Its an old one I tweaked with to change a couple things in it.

Thank-you Earthangel. Your comment speaks true about life.

Thank-you Margherita for the sweet comment.

:-)

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